Monday, April 27, 2009

When I'm Alone

Hii frnds i m just writng my second blog so i don't have much idea about it. I m writing my words through the poem which i have just written , so ready to read.................................

"Again there is a tear in my eye,
No one find out the reason why???

As someone told me not to cry
but the fact that tear is given by him , I can't deny

Though he is just a good frnd!!
but when i need him he never understand.

Why my expectations with everyone is so high,
that's the biggest disappointment $ makes me cry.

You have to pay for everything you did wrong,
Suck off paying, now i ask how long?????

Everybody is so busy so happy in their life,
I can't say to save me from the Tide..............

I don't want to show them my tears,
and this is the biggest fear.

I can overcome everything if my frnds will be with me ,
But they must be thinking of 'let it be'.

I always pray for my frnds only,
But still I'm alone and feeling Lonely.

I wish oneday someone will see the pain in my 'SMILE',
and I Promise he/she will always remain MINE."

4 comments:

  1. hi it is awesome poem yaar.....
    and it is the best one i have ever read among my friend's compositions, but one thing i want to say that is SORRY.......
    i know that it is for me... so this useless friend of yours is begging u to forgive me...
    and as i told before to be best friend of someone is not in my blood... i really doesn't deserve friends

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  2. Excellent piece! The way the whole writeup was treated, i would say 'informative' in its own way. This poem is a brillant expression of solitude and lonliness.
    So keep writeing

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  3. Sorry but i want to say that many things in this poem are not correct.The poem is very nice but u hav said i don't hav any best frnds,its just the fault of ur eyes dear.U says that my expectations r so high bt who says u to do that-its a well accepted fact that don't expect anything frm anyone.Nobody is happy in his/her life bt the thing is who shows & who hides.Hiding is better b'coz instead of giving tasalli and santavana nobody can do anything for anyone.

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  4. yar sch kahu...
    it was heart touching..simply superb!!!!

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